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    kittychuk



    Joined: 24 Aug 2004
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    PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 4:35 am    Post subject: My clickbank marketplace Reply with quote

    Dear All,

    Please give any comment to my website. The design is so simple.
    http://www.pickto.net

    And I would create some article to user.

    Thank
    Kitty
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    kaylowe



    Joined: 05 May 2004
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    PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

    Sad

    I will qualify this reply by saying that I am certainly no expert in sales copy and/or web design.

    1. To me, the copy "feels" very stilted and rigid. Sales copy should be more "you", "webmaster", "customer" rather than "user". More of a friendly, chatty feel would help.

    2. Get someone to help you with English grammar and syntax, especially if your target market is the US. I would be happy to help if you have no one available. For example, "We collect more than 10,000 product and service to you." would be "we collect more than 10,000 products and services for you".

    I'm sure that you will get suggestions from more successful webmasters than me. Good luck!

    Kay
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    kittychuk



    Joined: 24 Aug 2004
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    PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

    Dear kaylowe

    Thank you for your suggestion.

    Kitty
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    joeyc



    Joined: 30 Aug 2004
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    PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

    Nice start, but I think the links are a bit overwhelming.

    Try categorizing them or grouping them somehow

    -Joe
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